spare-jello's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[BioShocking]

It was short, but It was Funny.

On a normal, short, not icon'd animation, I would have voted a 0. The thing about this was just how funny it was. If I were you, I'd make it longer and add an icon. All in all, great job.

[Nuclear Freddy 2]

Nice, I like the style.

I'm not one for too much praise, so here's some constructive criticism-

For one thing, The outline color and the fill color seemed to be drastically different. I guess that it's okay, but they should have been closer in brightness.

Also, some of the parts seemed rushed. Instead of looking like Freddy's clothes were being forcibly taken off, it looked like he was allowing it.

Other than that, I really liked it. The animation was superb and the story(?) was interesting.

BritishMoose responds:

I didn't want them to be too close to each other 'cause I didn't want to lose the effect of the lines, if you know what I mean. Had the difference between the two shades been more subtle, I feel that he would have looked like a large blob of colour.

Yes, parts were rushed - I made it in 5 days :P

The story's still developing and will be hinted at a bit more with the next episode.

Thanks very much for your review - I'll take these points on-board when work on the third begins. Cheers for reviewing, I'm glad you enjoyed it :D

[Black And White Collab 4]

Great, but I found a few glitches.

First things first- the part right before mine (with the stars going upwards) was good, but the stars stayed throughout the rest of the animation, taking away from the last few things. Secondly, at times the left and top of the screen would turn white (just one line). Otherwise, great job everyone, and thanks, Fishhook, for putting it all together!

[Luis and the Cloud Sigs]

Loved it, just one problem...

You didn't use mine. Oh well. 5'd. I'm gonna go cry now.

Kart-Man responds:

Sowwy. Will you be my fwiend still? :(

[AverageMan Collab]

I liked it, and I should have joined...

Great job on it, all of you. The only downfall was the syncing- the song ran faster than the animation. If it weren't for that, I would have liked it enough for a 10.

[Naruto Comedian Dane Cook]

Good movie, but not genuine.

I've never not liked your flashes, but there's always something that gets in the way of me voting a five. The graphics are sometime scratchy, that's one thing, but there's something else- the sound. It's never really yours. Sure, Dane Cook's funny, but I've heard it millions of times. When you make a Naruto flash, try to make it more yours, even if the characters aren't.

[Pac-man -Z-]

Wow... Random.

Normally I wouldn't vote so high on a short sprite movie, but the randomness made me chuckle, sooo... I fived.

bonoDARK-AURA responds:

You fived?
Wow!
Thx so much!
Ill keep up the good work ^^/

[HighSchool Never Ends]

I normally vote either 0 or 5, but...

I couldn't really do that with this one. I liked a lot about it, but it wasn't really an animation, so to speak. It was more like a bunch of random goodies stockpiled into one spot, swallowed, then spit out with a song attached. It was good, but just good enough.

[You're the best collab]

I'm glad this came out as well and soon as it did.

When I joined this collab, I wasn't expecting much. It always happens to me- I'll join a collab, work hard on my part, then everything else turns out mediocre. Luckily for this, it wasn't the case. So many authors did such a great job, and there were too many good parts to count. I'm glad we finished this project in the amount of time we did, and I hope I can work with you all again soon.

-Spare Jello

Fora responds:

I'm suprised to about how any authors there are and the collab is done in 3 weeks OMG

[Paper Tree Machine _)-(_]

Doesnt seem like something you would do

Of course, I don't know you personally (hardly at all, actually), but an animation (that's weird in itself from you) about the environment? Now, onto reviewing.

It was short, but I'm not one to be talking. The animation was great (if not a little sketchy, and the message was clear to say the least. Great job- I think some animation's good for you.