spare-jello's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Raving Rabbids Commercial]

Funny and Short is always a good combination

The graphics could have been a little smoother, but if I complained about it then I would be a hypocrite. It was random enough to be funny and animated well enough for me to comment on it. Great job.

Snow-Fox responds:

i didnt know how to do joints well back when i started then stopped this, soo ya, could have been better ^^

[Evil Aliens]

It was ooookay....

But I have some constructive criticism. For one thing, attention to detail- unless it's a circle or square originally, don't use the circle tool. I know from experience that the brush tool is WAY better.

Also, unless you're great with it, don't use the pencil tool often. For backgrounds, maybe, but when it comes to characters and props then the brush is the way to go.

It was okay, but next time, work a little harder on the drawing.

mgproductions responds:

thanks for the critisim you know... alot of the time.. i dont use the pencil.. i just had to really rush it thats why you can see i cut some corners. and sorry but like some of the best animators on newgrounds use the pencil tool the only one i can really see an exception for is foamy..

[9:11 to NYC]

I don't find this funny.

Funny, in my opinion, does not involve DEATH. 6 years ago, people died because of terrorists. I could care less about the animation, but I find it appalling that you could just look at death the way you do. I know people that almost died that day, and it just makes me feel kind of sad that you don't show respect. But, because I need to make this more relevant, the animation was okay. Just make sure that you make it a little more humorous and a little less disrespecting.

TremcladClock responds:

You know it was funny.

[Spyware: A World Torn]

Really good, but the audio...

It was extremely unclear. Without the subtitles (a nice add, btw), I wouldn't have understood a word. Next time you do a voiced flash (with the quality of this I expect you will), use a different microphone. It doesn't have to be too expensive, but being audible would be nice.

Chag responds:

I completely agree, I've just resubmitted with higher sound quality so it should be a bit easier to understand, but yes. The subtitles are quite essential ><

[Nuclear Freddy 2]

Nice, I like the style.

I'm not one for too much praise, so here's some constructive criticism-

For one thing, The outline color and the fill color seemed to be drastically different. I guess that it's okay, but they should have been closer in brightness.

Also, some of the parts seemed rushed. Instead of looking like Freddy's clothes were being forcibly taken off, it looked like he was allowing it.

Other than that, I really liked it. The animation was superb and the story(?) was interesting.

BritishMoose responds:

I didn't want them to be too close to each other 'cause I didn't want to lose the effect of the lines, if you know what I mean. Had the difference between the two shades been more subtle, I feel that he would have looked like a large blob of colour.

Yes, parts were rushed - I made it in 5 days :P

The story's still developing and will be hinted at a bit more with the next episode.

Thanks very much for your review - I'll take these points on-board when work on the third begins. Cheers for reviewing, I'm glad you enjoyed it :D

[Luis and the Cloud Sigs]

Loved it, just one problem...

You didn't use mine. Oh well. 5'd. I'm gonna go cry now.

Kart-Man responds:

Sowwy. Will you be my fwiend still? :(

[Pac-man -Z-]

Wow... Random.

Normally I wouldn't vote so high on a short sprite movie, but the randomness made me chuckle, sooo... I fived.

bonoDARK-AURA responds:

You fived?
Wow!
Thx so much!
Ill keep up the good work ^^/

[You're the best collab]

I'm glad this came out as well and soon as it did.

When I joined this collab, I wasn't expecting much. It always happens to me- I'll join a collab, work hard on my part, then everything else turns out mediocre. Luckily for this, it wasn't the case. So many authors did such a great job, and there were too many good parts to count. I'm glad we finished this project in the amount of time we did, and I hope I can work with you all again soon.

-Spare Jello

Fora responds:

I'm suprised to about how any authors there are and the collab is done in 3 weeks OMG

[CandyRO: The Killer]

Great Animation, I've always Loved RO

Before I started going on newgrounds, it was RO day and night for 2 years. It's a great game and I'm glad to see an animation based on it. The only problem I found was the lack of moving... it seemed as though the characters were just drawn and tweened around. All in all, great flash.

5'd for being about RO

Dawky responds:

Thanks for the review. Yeah, there wasn't much "animating" in this, but, meh, that's what I intended it to be.