Score: 9

"Funny and Short is always a good combination"

submission: Raving Rabbids Commercial

date: November 17, 2007

The graphics could have been a little smoother, but if I complained about it then I would be a hypocrite. It was random enough to be funny and animated well enough for me to comment on it. Great job.

Score: 5

"It was ooookay...."

submission: Evil Aliens

date: October 13, 2007

But I have some constructive criticism. For one thing, attention to detail- unless it's a circle or square originally, don't use the circle tool. I know from experience that the brush tool is WAY better.

Also, unless you're great with it, don't use the pencil tool often. For backgrounds, maybe, but when it comes to characters and props then the brush is the way to go.

It was okay, but next time, work a little harder on the drawing.

Score: 0

"I don't find this funny."

submission: 9:11 to NYC

date: September 11, 2007

Funny, in my opinion, does not involve DEATH. 6 years ago, people died because of terrorists. I could care less about the animation, but I find it appalling that you could just look at death the way you do. I know people that almost died that day, and it just makes me feel kind of sad that you don't show respect. But, because I need to make this more relevant, the animation was okay. Just make sure that you make it a little more humorous and a little less disrespecting.

Score: 9

"I really liked it, but..."

submission: Lemon Smash

date: September 3, 2007

That doesn't mean that there isn't room for improvement. First things first- the background was just "eh." I'm not saying that I could do any better, but it didn't seem polished at all. Secondly, It didn't feel right when the guy moved. I can't put my finger on it, but I could tell that something was different. All in all, it was a good game, but if you added some more levels and some enemies (Evil Lemons, Anyone?), then it would be a lot better.

When Life gives you lemons, squirt them in somebody's eyes,

Spare-jello

Score: 9

"Really good, but the audio..."

submission: Spyware: A World Torn

date: September 1, 2007

It was extremely unclear. Without the subtitles (a nice add, btw), I wouldn't have understood a word. Next time you do a voiced flash (with the quality of this I expect you will), use a different microphone. It doesn't have to be too expensive, but being audible would be nice.

Score: 9

"Nice, I like the style."

submission: Nuclear Freddy 2

date: September 1, 2007

I'm not one for too much praise, so here's some constructive criticism-

For one thing, The outline color and the fill color seemed to be drastically different. I guess that it's okay, but they should have been closer in brightness.

Also, some of the parts seemed rushed. Instead of looking like Freddy's clothes were being forcibly taken off, it looked like he was allowing it.

Other than that, I really liked it. The animation was superb and the story(?) was interesting.

Score: 5

"Just funny enough."

submission: party time?

date: August 24, 2007

Though it was not a real, full movie, I would let this pass. The party boy thing was actually Really Funny.

Score: 8

"Great game, I see it getting a prize already"

submission: Wiggi Dance Academy

date: August 9, 2007

It's great that you came up with such a great idea without using the root command. Great job! I would only recommend working on the voices. They seemed both full of static and, at times, incomprehensible. Left sounded a heck of a lot like right, and so on. Keep it up!

Score: 10

"Loved it, just one problem..."

submission: Luis and the Cloud Sigs

date: July 28, 2007

You didn't use mine. Oh well. 5'd. I'm gonna go cry now.

Score: 9

"LilDwarf, I'm really impressed."

submission: The Pick of Destiny

date: July 5, 2007

A little over a year ago you were a mediocre sprite animator working on the SSBM collab. You were one of the first people from Newgrounds I got to know. From there you did some things in between (I watched them all, btw), then this. It's a great game and I played it till it could be played no more. Congrats on Daily 2nd and Front page, and I'm rooting for you in the Rock Out contest.