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Age/Gender: 15, Male
Location: My Computer
Job: Student
Don't look at my current submissions and think that it's how I draw today. My best example is... well... just wait for it.
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Exp. Points: 2,320 / 2,500
Exp. Rank #: 9,712
Voting Pow.: 5.70 votes
BBS Posts: 1,536 (1.69 per day)
Flash Reviews: 111
Music Reviews: 4
Trophies: 2
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111 Reviews | 42 w/ Responses
Funny, in my opinion, does not involve DEATH. 6 years ago, people died because of terrorists. I could care less about the animation, but I find it appalling that you could just look at death the way you do. I know people that almost died that day, and it just makes me feel kind of sad that you don't show respect. But, because I need to make this more relevant, the animation was okay. Just make sure that you make it a little more humorous and a little less disrespecting.
Author's Response:
You know it was funny.
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That doesn't mean that there isn't room for improvement. First things first- the background was just "eh." I'm not saying that I could do any better, but it didn't seem polished at all. Secondly, It didn't feel right when the guy moved. I can't put my finger on it, but I could tell that something was different. All in all, it was a good game, but if you added some more levels and some enemies (Evil Lemons, Anyone?), then it would be a lot better.
When Life gives you lemons, squirt them in somebody's eyes,
Spare-jello
Author's Response:
Yea it is a super cheap game, I'm trying harder on other stuff, this was just for fun.
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It was extremely unclear. Without the subtitles (a nice add, btw), I wouldn't have understood a word. Next time you do a voiced flash (with the quality of this I expect you will), use a different microphone. It doesn't have to be too expensive, but being audible would be nice.
Author's Response:
I completely agree, I've just resubmitted with higher sound quality so it should be a bit easier to understand, but yes. The subtitles are quite essential ><
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On a normal, short, not icon'd animation, I would have voted a 0. The thing about this was just how funny it was. If I were you, I'd make it longer and add an icon. All in all, great job.
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I'm not one for too much praise, so here's some constructive criticism-
For one thing, The outline color and the fill color seemed to be drastically different. I guess that it's okay, but they should have been closer in brightness.
Also, some of the parts seemed rushed. Instead of looking like Freddy's clothes were being forcibly taken off, it looked like he was allowing it.
Other than that, I really liked it. The animation was superb and the story(?) was interesting.
Author's Response:
I didn't want them to be too close to each other 'cause I didn't want to lose the effect of the lines, if you know what I mean. Had the difference between the two shades been more subtle, I feel that he would have looked like a large blob of colour.
Yes, parts were rushed - I made it in 5 days :P
The story's still developing and will be hinted at a bit more with the next episode.
Thanks very much for your review - I'll take these points on-board when work on the third begins. Cheers for reviewing, I'm glad you enjoyed it :D
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Though it was not a real, full movie, I would let this pass. The party boy thing was actually Really Funny.
Author's Response:
his name is "Flash 8 lock" and hes very funny! thank you
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"Great, but I found a few glitches."
First things first- the part right before mine (with the stars going upwards) was good, but the stars stayed throughout the rest of the animation, taking away from the last few things. Secondly, at times the left and top of the screen would turn white (just one line). Otherwise, great job everyone, and thanks, Fishhook, for putting it all together!
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"Great game, I see it getting a prize already"
It's great that you came up with such a great idea without using the root command. Great job! I would only recommend working on the voices. They seemed both full of static and, at times, incomprehensible. Left sounded a heck of a lot like right, and so on. Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Well there's only a few options for the sound setting I picked (which makes sure everything's synced up) and I didn't want to make you wait too long for it to load.
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You didn't use mine. Oh well. 5'd. I'm gonna go cry now.
Author's Response:
Sowwy. Will you be my fwiend still? :(
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"I liked it, and I should have joined..."
Great job on it, all of you. The only downfall was the syncing- the song ran faster than the animation. If it weren't for that, I would have liked it enough for a 10.
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